All Comments on 'My Old Guy'

Great start but it seemed like you got most of the way through and decided to end it and spent very little time on it. If some effort had gone into the ending, this would have been a great story.

Thanks for your feedback Anonymous. Actually the ending made me laugh. Tasty Tasha can't wait to get back to her Old Guy after Chastity Class.

What a great story. I could picture it vividly. As far as the ending... well I didn't make it that far before getting off! I loved the age difference and the public setting. Such a great job painting a picture in words.

But surely - there should be a sequel here?

I will work on a sequel. In the meantime you might enjoy my pending chapters on a new novel "Dalton's Delights" when they are posted and which pursues a similar theme.