All Comments on 'My Older Brother's Frisky Friend'

Cute

It’s a very well written story and it’s captured the essence of sexual exploration at that age.

Arsehole young man/ boy - because let’s face it at 22 he’s still in the boy mindset where sex is concerned add in a young woman and at 18 they always think they’re so grown up. Ridiculously naive enough to not demand condoms from that point onwards.

The only thing that creeped me out was the brother’s involvement. Given how much our early sexual experiences can influence us that lucky girl may well be on her way to discovering the joys of BDSM.

Tess (UK)

Loved it. This is how I and my friends pictured losing our virginity(our brothers' friends) Needless to say it didn't happen that way.

Loved this. You perfectly walked the line between forced and consensual. Writing and characters were great too!

Very well written. Nice story. Hot. Perfect.

Let Liam and Liz go at it again -- their lovemaking -- and give us descriptions! I imagine sexy, muscular Liam has a bit of sexy chest hair for his gorgeous masculine body! Let Liz explore the hairy chest, abs, crotch, and keep going!

Great story about first time, but if Liam got her cherry there would be a bit of a bloody mess. Also need a bit more at the end about the second time. 4 stars

I second the comment of Cinnamongirl27. This was a perfect first time story. Wow. 5* ~~ JB Edwards

Just found this story - I second JBEdwards' second

I think Rancher46 doesn't know as much about defloration as he thinks he does - sometimes there is blood, and sometimes there isn't ... and no, we don't need to know more about second and subsequent times - the reader is expected to put in a little effort, too

Witton

This wasn't bad. I wish the sex had lasted longer and had been a bit more descriptive and that he had done more with her boobs. I'd like to read anothet chapter about their second go around. Add some foreplay, boob play and let him go all out her. Maybe her on top too