All Comments on 'My One and Only'

by DamienDeath20

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Holy shit that was hot.

One of the best I've seen on here. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Damn!

Can’t leave us hanging like that... More please....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Excellent

More please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wow! Hot!

Personally,I could do without the pee or the ATM, but still very hot! Look forward to reading more from you!

DeborahAnneDeborahAnneabout 6 years ago
You must keep this story going.

That got my panties wet for sure, now I will have to jack off and lick up my cum again. I would love to try that cock in my cute little butt, or drink the cum down my throat. I have a 12 inch dildo that I use and push at least 9 inches inside of me, I so would love another real cock to slide in there. Not sure if I could handle that long one she had, but I certainly would try. da.cd@frontier.com

DeborahAnneDeborahAnneabout 6 years ago
Pee

I have never drank pee from a cock, but my second wife and I would start with me giving her oral, then when she told me to fuck her I would, then after I came I would go back down and give her oral again, she would almost always have a release, then she would pee, sometimes it was so sweet, but other times it was very strong and at those times I would let it flow into my mouth and out onto my pillow, that pillow stills smells good to me. I also would love to have that cock from my ass after he cum's to pull out and move to put it in my mouth, I taste my bum sometimes but that would be so good. da,cd@frontier.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What a turn of events

Hey Damien, I’ve been reading your stories since you published your first one and want to say great job! Can I know if Maria is a bbw or is she one of those slim models, the description doesn’t really detail it as it curvy figure can be taken Two ways. Thanks and keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
spelling error

Maybe that's why is cock was oozing a torrent of precum from her pounding.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
oh yes

Your story was incredible! My little boy clitty is so horny now and my love hole is throbbing with the thought of having that big overgrown cock up my ass I can almost feel it cumming inside of me😍

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
piss?

I don't know what is with people and piss. It's nasty.

Toni1117Toni1117almost 5 years ago
Great work.

Just wish you had more stories where the male loves it and isn't just relentlessly raped.

Toni1117Toni1117almost 5 years ago
So deliciously dirty.

Love it when a Futa pisses down someone else's throat pussy. Just wish there was a second part where they explore just how dirty and perverted they can get together.

EroticReader1986EroticReader1986almost 5 years ago
Fucktoy

I'd love to be used like that in every way, especially the piss part. Great story wish there was a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Like many others I would also love a sequel! Very nice work though, please keep it up!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A complete package.

Thoroughly enjoyed from the start till the end. The way you narrate has a special touch. Pissing was an added bonus imo. So hot, dominant and sweet (or salty? :3) Maria. Thank you for this quality content.

JD

Client8Client8almost 3 years ago

Loved it! But, I notice a few recurring aspects in stories featuring ts on male that i find over used, myself included:

Cock Shock - male person being stupefied by her appendage upon first exposure.

Satisfaction Hesitation - male being confused about liking/loving being bottomed.

Extrema Dominta- TS with huge attitude and super powers. Oversized appendages and brute strength.

Gag Bag - personally not a fan of airway obstruction and slimy fluid injection (never "sweet").

Refraction Contraction - nobody has a 10 second intercoital recovery time

Pain - no need to describe how bad it hurts, which does not always occur.

Reticent Remorse - if it feels good than it is. Guilt over novel enjoyment wears me thin.

Insults on the wing - I'm a proponent of vocally expressed passion as much as any and enjoy imagining dirty talk. But, please, ease up on calling the recipient a "bitch".

Orgasm Phantasm - "Best I ever had" orgasm, largest/longest cum dump, sex, etc. Making love need not always be epically transformative.

I believe in "wrote it like you stole it" fantasy and imagination and thusvhave no business telling anybody what to put down in words. Just wish I'd come across a bit more originality.

Client8Client8almost 3 years ago

This could be maybe the best story I've read on this site yet

amidja16amidja16over 1 year ago

Ahhh, another horse cock sexually crazed psycho borderline raping the one she supposedly loves. That's the fetish I guess... One thing that I just can't get over is that no one knows she's futa despite her being a BIKINI model. There were rampant rumors going around that Lady Gaga was a hermaphrodite because a paparazzi managed to take a shot under her dress and it showed what looked like a slight bulge. In reality it was a combination of a weird angle and underwear fail. In your story Maria has a camera pointed at her ass and crotch almost the entire day and this isn't even her first photo shoot. And yet she somehow managed to hide a 13" trouser snake from the entire internet world?

Lawman01Lawman016 months ago

Need more sequels to this story.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Excellent! Good that she was still the Mami and he the papa! Sequels for this one would be great!

1Martiniman1Martiniman3 months ago

I’ll make this simple…Bravo! A must read.

ColonelinguistColonelinguistabout 2 months ago

You’ve arrived right at the epicenter of what I enjoy the most about this kind of fantasy.

Sometimes it takes a big brave boy to selflessly invite his lover in his boi pussy for the very first time DD. Nice work!

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