All Comments on 'My One True Love Ch. 01'

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griffin57griffin57about 11 years ago
good start

this does work.

catphan8catphan8about 11 years ago

So this guy has never even heard of french kissing before? I get that you're going with the shy teenager formula, but don't you think you went a bit overboard? It's really hard to believe an 18 year old doesn't even know what french kissing is!?!? Good story so far and your writing is good just thought that one thing was a bit over the top! 4*

mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggabout 11 years ago
To catphan

If you read the first paragraph of the intro (in italics) you will have the explanation why an 18-year old is so naive.

To f1dude: For me, this works fine, but I'm curious as to how different the story is going to be going to be from the High School Love series (which I also liked a lot!)

f1dude_lotusf1dude_lotusabout 11 years agoAuthor

I'm glad someone at least read the entire text...

@ mumblegooseegg: admittedly, this will be somewhat similar to HSL. However it will go a lot further than HSL. The plan is to go through high school, and at least through college, possibly even further (maybe even introducing family aspects as well). It mostly depends on the feedback and general reception of the series.

I might as well post this now, as I've stated at the beginning it's supposed to be based on me. However, I've never been in love or with a transgendered girl, so all of the experiences I'm describing are bits and pieces I've picked up from reading other stories on Literotica and putting my own spin on things. So if things seem disjointed or out of place somehow, it's because I have no experience in either category.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story!

I love it, its kind of similar to my life expect I wasn't in football/band but I was a YM and am quite shy around girls. The only difference between me and him is that whenever a girl talks to me I bullshit my way out of it if I can or pull a tactical retreat if I can't.

illwindillwindabout 4 years ago

It's not "intensive purposes."

It's also not "intense of purposes."

The phrase is "intents and purposes."

That is all.

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