All Comments on 'My Own Heaven Ch. 03'

This is building nicely, if a little fast in chapter 3. Thought she submitted a bit too willingly, too conveniently (a little unbelievably), as I might have preferred what happened on Sunday to be on the second weekend. I sure hope it doesn’t get physically brutal in future chapters. She seems like such a nice girl! Jean K

And it's building up beautifully but having seen all the chapters still to read I know they rest of them are going to be full of "my bare little pussy", "my tight pussy", "my adorable tight ass", and "my 38Bs". It's annoying! We KNOW she's petite but every paragraph as her vain self talking about something on her body!

I like portions of this story - but this chapter should be BDSM so if the reader wants to skip it for this reason they may.

Keith is a man after my own heart, He knows that true dominance doesn't need lots of shouting and bullying. If you take thay route you've lost, or ay least you will never get the best out of your girl.

Far better that your slut begs to be used and walks hand in hand with you down the darker path.