All Comments on 'My Own Heaven Ch. 16'

you have a good command of the language. I've commented before on the only negative that I've found: a slight overuse of 'little'. Oh, well, I can live with it. Thank you for the story.

Another hot chapter. I loved the way he let her control the way the game went and once he knew what she wanted, he took over. Your writing is wonderful, Dani. Reading you story has opened up a whole new me. My husband doesn't know why, but he loves it.