All Comments on 'My Paralegal Takes a Second Job'

What a dumb lawyer! An irresistible foreboding of future disaster hangs over this all-too-predictable story right from the first sentence.

Hi.

I'm not clear what our narrator's "relationship status" is at the beginning of this story, but it very much seems that his relationship with his paralegal assistant Jessica has now changed - and.that there is serious mutual physical and emotional attraction between them (besides which, I think I see a hint of a desire to continue the story -- possibly including "fun and games" with "Star" and "Sunny").

So: might a sequel (at least one) be coming? (I think I would like one.)

E. (or "nycreader")

I enjoyed this. I dated a girl in the 80s that had a secret life like this. So I walked into the titty bar she worked at, WOW. Shocked us both. Relationship kept on tho. Interesting story here. Good story line. Smart woman. Taking advantage of us guys for her profit. 4 stars. Oh Anon fuck off. It's a story. A very good one

DragonRider55

Anon. Quite boring and very predictable.

Well written, the strip club sounds like one I went to many years ago. You did a good job of describing things, without going overboard. A fine line, but you managed it.

Looking forward to more by you!

Thanks for sharing your writing.

BTW, I hit 3 stars instead of 5 by mistake, my Apologies!

Must write the Slumber Party sequel!!! Please!!!

FDD

This retired lawyer never was so lucky. Somehow real estate transactions are not as rewarding as litigation. Great story! Five stars. Is there a slumber party story I need to find?

Great story And a good fantasy from both perspectives. I enjoyed it. Beth x