All Comments on 'My Petite Fiancée Surprises Me Pt. 14'

by NewGuy2022

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Why do you feel guilty? Seems like everyone is getting what they want.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I hope we hear more about Uyen!

NewGuy2022NewGuy20224 months agoAuthor

I think I feel guilty because in my mind if you have sex with someone on a regular basis, a relationship should form. I'm not naive enough to believe that is the case for everyone, I just feel like I'm being a male whore if I just have sex with women and nothing more. I'm not saying that's wrong, I'm just saying it isn't right for me at this time. Maybe I'll loosen up in time.

Can I ask why you like the Uyen character?

pjpbpjpb5 days ago

4.5/5 overall for allchapters so far (rounded up)

Waiting for more. It feels current story is close to the point of no return where MC and Heather's expectations cannot match anymore (and despite his naivette, MC seems to recognize it already, starting with performance for other men at the beach). Considering where the story brought us so far, I would actually feel better if the Tammi became primary love interest, she does not seem to be pushing her agenda so strong. Heather, despite her love declarations, is described as pure cuckqueen, no intimacy and little sex without third parties.

I suggest additional 'naive' 'gullible' tags.

Potential storyline ideas:

1. Kau'i visits pregnant, only pretended to take a pill (consistent with love declarations, jowever crazy after 1d). Less complication: Kau'i moves in with MC , sans pregnancy

2. Roles reversal Tammi/ Heather (I.e. same city as Tammi job opportunity for MC)

3. Therapy for Heather (current shape and direction, she does mot have any actual relationship with MC)

4. No more Heather initiated sex with strangers, it will be difficult to continue without story getting repetitive

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