All Comments on 'My Petite Fiancée Surprises Me'

I hope this is going to have more parts to it

I hope this is going to have more parts to it

I'm enjoying this very much!

Lighthearted with a splash of humor!

Looking forward to part 2!

This is good but it seems like it is unfinished.

I like when you say what you are thinking, it is a little more engaging but it needs to be clearer to the reader.

I enjoyed it but doesn't this belong in loving wives?

Not what I was expecting but it didn't dissappoint.

I admit you probably got an extra star just because I have a thing for short girls.

Thanks for the encouragement - there is more to come.

Pretty good for a first story.

OK, you got my attention. When do we get the second half?

I don't think I've ever gotten a chuckle reading a pornographic story before.

Great start to the story!

Excellent start and can't wait to ready more!!!