All Comments on 'My Rival / My Rival Ch. 01'

Great story can’t wait for part 2

I really enjoyed that. Thank you. I hope there's more where that came from.

Omg so hot!!! I hope this becomes a romance.

Definitely a five-star chapter. I'm not really sure about either girl with their strange insecurities. It will be interesting to see how this story develops.

I want more!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Great to see a new series started

Awesome Introduction Chapter!!

Very exciting 1st chapter where the worm has already metamorphosed from Insecure Emily to a Stronger Emily.

I will definitely enjoy Emily & McKayla's evolution & journey from Rivals to wherever their future takes them.

T will surely be here following their story for the long ride🎉!

Emphatically A 5*- Chapter

A great start with some intriguing new characters. I'm interested. Please go on.

Started out nicely but rapidly devolved into a completely unrealistic scenario at their second meeting. Sorry.

This storyline will be interesting to say the least, better yet intriguing. Already establishing two women who are alive and well on their way to entertaining us.

very hot and interesting. great writing, damnation this is good. solid four stars

Excellent story, I would have liked it to be a little slower. But otherwise it was fantastic!

New kink *unlocked* 🔓

The shifting of power, in the way McKayla teaches Emily, is a really intriguing idea and you've told it well here. Good luck with the end of the series!

Really good the reversal was so well done. Thanks for sharing it.

Nice start.

The main character is unsympathetic to the point of being annoying.