All Comments on 'My Rival / My Rival Ch. 02'

This was by far one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. The relationship between the two characters is so sweet and sexy at the same time. I absolutely love this story.

Thoroughly enjoyed your “My Rival/My Rival” storyline and the two protagonists. The tension and uncertainty you created perfectly matched the setting, and loved the way you slowly unwrapped/revealed young love. Am hopeful you have more to share between Emily and McKayla; the last line left me a bit sad as intended — heartfelt joy for only a night. No way; they have discovered too much about themselves. Thanks for sharing. 5 stars easily.

I have not read your stories before, but this series was definitely a great one. Good characters, realistic and very sexy. Keep it up.

more...like lots more please . Love these two

I didn’t think this story would get better but it just blew the past my expectations . Can’t wait for the next part.

Great story! Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.

Straight to the top as one of my absolute favorites. A wonderful, heartwarming story. Love them both.

This is amazing. Even better than the "Sarah Catfight" series. Please keep making more.

Thank you so much for all the amazing comments! I loved this chapter as well. It might take a few weeks for chapter 3. I have a lot on my plate right now with my other site.

Great story, look forward to more!

I positively love this story. These girls are so sweet together. Thank you for writing it. Please give them a great ending.

Another Great Story!!

I am already sensing that My Rival / My Rival with be another awesome story series🎉

Cannot wait until Ch. 03 is posted, since Ch. 01 & 02 were both 5*-Star Performances!

So good! One of the things I love most about this site is that it is full of hidden gems like this story. A trifecta of excellent writing, an interesting story and great sex! You are doing an outstanding job building the relationship between these two characters. The slow shift from hate fuck to something approaching love??? as the rivals break down their barriers with each other adds such an interesting blend of heat and tender passion. Great job! Can't wait to see where it goes from here.