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All Comments on 'My Roommate Owed Me a Threesome'

by elolopa

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story. Maybe the sex scenes are a little clunky.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very sexy, I liked story. But is too many grammatical errors. U needs editor...

JustaWriter_21JustaWriter_21almost 3 years ago

Solid first story, great set up! Felt a little rushed and lacking in detail once the sex started though.

TeemuphillipsTeemuphillipsalmost 3 years ago

I am really not trying to be snarky as I thought this could have been a good story. I have to wonder if English is a second language for you. If so, be encouraged. Before you post next time, have a friend proofread and help you with the grammar.

AtrampboyAtrampboyalmost 3 years ago

Fun story!! I hope there's more to come from this crew

elolopaelolopaalmost 3 years agoAuthor

@Teemuphillips: You are right. English is my second language. Thanks for the suggestion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Write more!

SamCab4SamCab4almost 3 years ago

Please write more!! I absolutely loved it and wouldn’t mind some sort of continuation with this

elolopaelolopaalmost 3 years agoAuthor

@SamCab4, @Anonymous:

Thanks for the support! I plan to write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This vaguely has the ring of being a true story. One can hope...

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