All Comments on 'My Ruined Alone Time'

by LizardGummy

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bananashake1997bananashake199711 months ago

Giving her masculine looks and thoughts , don't forget to add her body hair matching to her bushy eyebrows please

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I love FemFreaks writing too. This is a great start too!!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I would also like FemFreak to continue that series but PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS ONE TOO!!! This was exactly the tyoe of story I have been hoping for on here but it was so short! Please please please please keep writing it!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Please chapter 2 and more please oh please oh please

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Can't wait to see where this story goes.

KatiwantsKatiwants11 months ago

Such a wonderful start for this story!!

I would so enjoy more chapters!!

DianeRedfernDianeRedfern11 months ago

Interesting start - Definitely interested in reading more.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Oh my gosh this is a wonderful start!!!!

SissyBoy1WarszawaSissyBoy1Warszawa11 months ago

A great start to the story of Alex (I really like Alex's character and see myself in him) and Isabel. I am already waiting with great impatience for the further adventures of Isabel and Alex. Greetings from Poland, SissyBoy from Warsaw.

Wspaniały początek historii Alexa (bardzo podoba Mi się postać Alexa i widzę w niej samego siebie) i Isabel. Już czekam z wielką niecierpliwością na dalsze losy Isabel i Alexa. Pozdrawiam z Polski, SissyBoy z Warszawy.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I love femfreaks as well and beginning to love this story more pleasese right part 2

jennifurzoejennifurzoe10 months ago

Please Please Please do say there's going to be more to this,just can't leave a gurl hanging without a finish to it ,

LizardGummyLizardGummy10 months agoAuthor

I would like to continue this but it was initially meant as a short one-shot. I wrote out an idea of how this may develop a few weeks later but it's been a bit of a struggle. In a simpler way, I could just add a second part that finishes the night but something about that doesn't feel amazing.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Please please more, please continue this. I love everything about it.

skirtsonguysskirtsonguys10 months ago

Please continue wide hips for a guy. He needs to be fucked so bad.

KnottyDaphneKnottyDaphne9 months ago

Definitely continue!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I read that you meant it to be a short one-shot. But could you please continue this for you somewhat left with a cliffhanger? Need to know how he reacts to her saying that You're mine now

LokirinLokirin7 months ago

Please continue this, you're definitely underestimating how well you match up for FemFreak

1Martiniman1Martiniman26 days ago

You need to give yourself a lot more credit than you are…this story is oh so good! If there ever was a story that needed more chapters…this is the story. A perfect start if I ever read one, but I’m dying to see where Isabel takes Alex and how their relationship can grow. No matter what you think, this story has proved that you are a good writer and I hope that you will continue this story…it is a must read! Also am now looking forward to reading your other stories as you are now in my “favorites”. Thank you for your effort, you are appreciated.

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I'm a long reader of literotica but this is my account for stories. I am not a good writer. In fact, I'm quite awful at being able to properly detail scenes. But I try nonetheless. The biggest thing I focus on is writing monologues. I overthink things in my own head and have ...