All Comments on 'My Runaway Sister'

What a fucking rapist asshole he turned out to be.

As many have said, Chris became a total dick towards the end. Was kind of hoping he wouldn't get the pussy by that point, but of course, life is good to the assholes more often than not. There was at least a bit of humour in there. Not the most plausible ending but it gave me a chuckle. I mean he was all like "you're my sister, we can't fuck" for so long but then he does a 180 and he's suddenly comfortable with something like his mum walking in and delivering a casual comedic response, "just collecting rent". Yeah, OK, sure.

Loved it. The sister encouraged him to fuck her, walking around in panties. A man can only take so much. Letting him know he could jerk off around her, id fuck her too. Please write part 2. Do they stay together ? Does the mum accept it ? How jealous is Dale of the brother ?

The last two parts ruined it.

Hmm so, the MC is a coldhearted arsehole that appears incapable of showing any love or compassion for his sister.

His mother is an idiot listening to her boyfriend and not protecting her daughter.

The daughter's portrayal is conveyed in the worst way when all she needed was love and protection from her brother.

A sad story indeed!

I think it’s fair for commenters to note that this is non-consent. It’s not for everyone, not for me to be honest, but the author made it clear that’s what’s happening and we cannot ding someone for honesty.

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Overall, I think the timeline is a bit too compressed and the feelings that Lori has for Chris is a bit too rushed. I think you have something here and the ability to bring it to fruition, but it didn’t coalesce here.

YOU'LL GET USED TO IT !!! What an asshole.

Great story with a great ending. 5 stars!

Bill S.

"I really wanted to stay," she whispered into my ear. "If you had played your cards right, I would have done anything."

That's right)But he will introduce himself as a loser who constantly apologizes.Pathetic.

Really good until the end