by carbinemaster
Always the eagle eye grandparents.....Tho I imagine his thrashing around while in the hospital didn't help. Oh the truth shall not set you free, but it can lead to many cans of worms. I like this story. the development and the people you have shown us. I can imagine you can take us about anywhere, so I await your story. Yes I enjoy.GO! GP
Great story; fabulous cliff-hanger. I look forward to the next chapters.
I absolutely love this chapter, it had so much to say in just 2 short pages I'm bursting with emotions and thought it provoked. He once more saved his sister not giving his own safety a second thought, no wonder grandma scolded him with ease. Speaking of grandma - I bet she saw them in the car when they arrived but they were too focused on each other to notice her in the greenhouse. Now I wonder how hard she'll roast him for it and if she already talked with Gracie about it???
Well this chapter gets a vey solid and well deserved 5* and hopefully the nest one will come out soon!
Don't keep us waiting for the next chapter please!!!!!
The story held me in gaze... One of the best story line. I've read so far. You're too talented. Keep them coming
All the good positive phrases have been used... so please keep ( them ) coming.Well written, encaptivating story line,Hooked, more... again please.
But I wouldn't give that grandmother the time of day. What Kevin and Grace are doing are absolutely none of her business and they do not have to accountable to her.
I love it... it is so good... if i could give 10 stars I would, but now you will have to do with only 5... I am sorry :P
. Bull.Shit.there is always ftime for sex. CLEARLY HE IS GAY Parents are not always in the house. Why not the backseat of a car. Blanket at the lake.
.6 years with a girl friend and no bare tits or pussy. No wonder she dumped him. HE IS GAY. Now his sister BEGS FOR LOVE & SEX AND HE IS STILL JACKING OFF.
I will read one more chapter to see what grandma say. I think he should let Matt's friend FUCK HIM IN THE ASS. He is gay and needs to know what a cock is used.
He just happens to be wearing his emergency bracelet?
My friends who wear the paracord bracelet (or key fob) wear them all the time because one never knows when there might be an emergency. It's a habit for them.
The story is nice, but I would've enjoyed it more if weren't so cheesy.
No sex at all but still amazingly done. I came here for the story and the emotions and the lives of the characters not just the sex. This was an amazing chapter and i cant wait to read the next part. Grace is super lucky her brother was there both times to rescue her lol. Also i love the way you end each chapter with "My Saving Grace".
Love the way you’re focused on the story more then just sex or fucking Etc. Amazing chapter and onwards to the next one lol.
Under normal circumstances, I would probably be willing to give you a five for this chapter. It wasn't filled with incredibly stupid crap like the first two were. However the whole pond accident/rescue was stretching the believability factor to the point of breaking. 😳 4/5
Oh boy, I bet he ends up spilling it all. Then comes the judgement and whatnot from people who should mind their own fucking business, just because they don't like others living their life the way they want them to. At least that's what I'm expecting. Hope I'm wrong. Also, yeah the pond thing seems rather contrived. Why would they be so close to it when they're aware of the serious dangers? Doesn't seem too plausible to me, but I guess it's just another setup to use the story title as a chapter closer. Anyway, a minor nitpick. Moving on.