All Comments on 'My Secretary Ch. 01'

Leo,

Just so you know I cannot wait for the continuing part of this story.

Keep up the great work.

Jules

jules_b_67@yahoo.com.au

And sensitive. Very different, believable, easy to read.

Well Done!

really, I keep waiting for 2nd chapter! G R E A T! ! !

keep that tune, please

What a great story! I love the way you wrote it, incredible, wonderful...I am so impressed as to how you turned a terrifying situation into something romantic and erotic...Great job!

Superb,superb!

I have only just come across this story and was totally engrossed.I m almost cheered when the rescue crew got to them,and the sex scenes seemed to be totally real.Anyone who likes good stories should read this.

but please stop trying to make this a love affair! The end killed it. They are not in love, they will not "make love"..They will have some damn good fucks, though! Well, before both of their sexual organs shut down from over stimulation, that is. Thanks for writing!

What an erotic tale! I don't normally enjoy cheating stories, but this story so exceeds such mere simplicity. It is totally filled with rich emotion. I don't think I have ever read a finer example of pure talent on display. Thank you for the story.

Just another old folks story.

*****

Starfairy

Great story. I will try to read all you write.

What just happened? I feel almost dazed.

I suppose I could go on about how unrealistic, how physically impossible for sexual organs to remain at such high arousal for so long. Or how it might fit in SciFi/fantasy. Or how such an experience would not produce uncontrollable sexual urges. But it is those very things that make the story so hot and compelling that it riveted my attention. Also, it might make me like psychiatrist Patterson! Besides, I go to Literotica for entertainment and enjoyment, not for realism (especially if it's sad). This story delivered!

When he began by relating how the secretary kept the department on even keel, it reminded me of a sign that I saw many years ago in a place of business :

DO YOU WANT THE MAN WHO IS IN CHARGE

OR THE WOMAN WHO KNOWS WHAT'S GOING ON?

Paul in Oklahoma

the usual LW drivel....e.g. " his cock grew hard as he watched...", "Even though she had betrayed him for years and the children weren't his, he couldn't live without her....", "He was excited by the thought of spicing up their sex life by...", "He froze, couldn't breathe, was nauseous, and cried as he watched....", "He hated it, but he was a man of 'honor', so he told her that she could use her hall pass to console the grieving former Navy seal whose beloved chihauhau had been eaten by a pit bull."

There is no end to the formulaic cuckish crap in LW. This story, though, is novel. Just the creativity alone is is worth a 5, even though it looks like it may degenerate into a "stroker."

Like the story. Author needs to cut way back on use of exclamation points.

The building collapse was a creative vehicle for throwing these budding adulterers together. I’m not sure about 3 days of constant arousal though, and surely being trapped under tons of rubble would have resulted in limb amputations? Never mind, I’m prepared to suspend my disbelief as long as this pair get down to some serious bonking, deceit, cuckoldry and other such shenanigans.

How in the fuck did this idiotic drivel rate 4 stars on average? Were the readers sitting in an sealed outhouse sucking in the fumes?

Nope, not this one.

The absolute most ridiculous scenario I believe I have ever read... you actually call this writing?

Dirt people.