All Comments on 'My Secretary, Jo'

Brilliant, best story I've read in a long time, well done.

Sorry, but IMHO this is pure unadulterated pubescent drivel, perhaps scribbled down by a 13-year-old adolescent with those rampaging hormone surges which many of us did suffer from all those years ago, but have been far too embarrassed about to own up to, ever since!

Hopefully, he WILL make at least a halfway decent writer if, and when, he matures a little! Good Luck, keep on writing, but stop trying too hard, and loosen-up, try to make ALL your characters believable, please!

PS: "For a women who just found..." is plain WRONG! -Because "women" is the PLURAL of "woman" so you can't have "a women" no more than you can have "a men" except maybe, at the end of a prayer! - SIMPLE, Yes?