All Comments on 'My Seduction of Ayush Pt. 04'

Previously, I had asked for a longer story with more satisfying parts. The slow burn off really made it an issue. This story although short, was much more satisfying. You should make the next story longer, and try to experiment more with it. Shouldn't be just conventional sex, make it more taboo and push borders. This will make it better with a 2-3 page story, instead of just 1. You should also try to involve Neha and try to gradually build to a threesome.

great..