All Comments on 'My Sensitive Son Ch. 05'

Perfect ❤️

I liked it. You were very descriptive, and though your 'shouldn't was not perfect, neither is ours. Remember, we in the United States speak American, not English, so you might say it's American English, as the Canadians are speaking Canadian English, Australians speak Aussy English, and so on. You might get some negative comments; just ignore them. You wrote a good story, it kept us interested, and horny. Suggest finding someone to help with grammar and editing, but don't change your style. Good job. Keep writing.

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