All Comments on 'My Sew Called Life'

'My SEW Called Life' ?? You try to be a writer and you can't even spell SO? Are you kidding me?? I won't read anything with such lousy spelling!

Don’t pay attention to that anonymous jackass. I got the gist of the title.

I hope there will be a part 2 soon. Keep up the good work.

Well done!

We did get some insight into the characters - Paul, Ellie, and Ashley - which doesn’t always happen in stories here. I would have liked to know more about both Ashley and Ellie, though; maybe you can provide more of a chacterization about each of them if you develop this story further. Ellie seems sweet, and Ashley also has some appealing personal qualities. Not a simple nice girl versus bitchy babe tale. Sentence structure is varied, and editing is good. Hope you will write and submit more stories. You have talent,

And I enjoyed the punny title;)

You have a very good start to a great story...the ending though seemed a bit confussing...You should have mentioned how much time had passed and just where they were at in there relastionship. It is good enough to deserve a second chapter too. Keep writing and exploring your talent. And the title is perfact. A little humor and word play are always in order..

Like the story a lot and to the anonymous person get a life and understand what a play on words means sheesh

I usually don't think much of a title but you caught my eye. The read was great flow was great and story line, well it NEEDS A SECOND OR THIRD CHAPTER. I believe you found your nitch in life as a writer, keep going I will look for more and more.

Great story and as others have said ignore the critics that didnt get why your title was what it was , I really hope you'll continue with more stories . Even thought I wasnt a virgin I was in a similar situation with a " friend " I cared for and someone I had feelings for for many years before we had sex which upset my " friend " but things worked out 2 years later when we had a 3some .

....and Paul was a good boy-always going down on them, without being asked...

tho did wonder when he and Elli did it, as Ash had made a point of saying it was OK if he came in her....

You MUST continue the story! Explore Ashley’s fascination with “Daddy” and see where Paul’s relationship with Elli goes... perhaps a threesome resulting in Ash getting knocked up too?

You do need an editor though to catch the little things. Your use of ‘seen’ for ‘saw’ for example. A couple other little things that escape my memory just now. They don’t take away from your very nicely done story. I’ve noticed similar mistakes in your other story too - which I also enjoyed.

Part 2 soon please.

Need to explore more with the two main characters and ashley