All Comments on 'My Sex Tale'

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RTR10RTR10over 4 years ago

Love that little shocker at the very end.....he underestimated his quiet, sweet, sexually conservative wife!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Clinical

This could have been a fine, fun and rollicking tale, and so very erotic it its telling.

However, the turgid prose it seem far more like the confession of a Baptist accounting professor.

It was also lacking almost completely in the kind of eroticism that flows out through detailed description of people in passionate moments.

Consequently, I just couldn't make it through to he end.

Loosen up, recall your own experiences in detail, and write in a way that brings the readers right in there with you ... and makes them want to watch the whole thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hi

A woman who would suck another's dick & had never sucked mine, I would ditch her.

white towerwhite towerover 4 years ago
good one

nice sobering moment at the end!

Ray RobertsRay Robertsover 3 years ago

Revenge sex is never a good thing and this story suffered because of it

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