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"Wow... Really?"
"Yeah, I think you're the hottest guy ever. And you've always been so nice to me. I felt like we had this connection," he says.
"We do. I just didn't think it was this kind of connection."
"So now what?" he asks.
"Like I know..."
"Do you still want me?" he asks, his eyes look so sad as if he's expecting me to say no.
"I mean, I'm not gay or anything, but if I'm being honest, I do. But I want you as a girl," I admit.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymous7 months agoIt's a good story and well written. I only caught one error in the story that made me pause - Sarah would be the president of a sorority - not a fraternity.
To improve the story, you might develop the characters a little more somehow. I'm not exactly sure what I am asking for with this critique. I didn't feel a real connection with any of the characters until the middle of Andrew's transformation. Assuming other chapters will follow, the character development so far may be just fine. At the conclusion of Chater 1, I'm interested in what lies ahead for Andrew and Arthur. Thre is more to tell.
I share my thoughts with the intent of encouragement. I hope they are received that way.
Michaelfantasiesabout 1 year agoI wish I had a best friend like that, when I was younger. I was a lot like Andrew. I was picked on and teased, and bullied. My first time giving oral was forced. The first time a man fucked me HURT! I wished things were different.
