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All Comments on 'My Sister Anastasia Pt. 02'

by BigMadStork

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linnearlinnearalmost 5 years ago
Wild

I do love your work and I'm glad you explained about the gang bang. You have one twisted mind but I love it, I do wonder how a guy who has had been looking for his sister for so long had time to get into bdsm?

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowalmost 5 years ago
needs some added tags

Nothing in the tags about the humiliation aspect of chapter 6. I stopped reading at that point.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Needs more story

You had good character development in part 1, but didn't keep up their growth in the second. Also you left many plot threads dangling, you could of had several more chapters.

Lovetron52Lovetron52over 3 years ago

I enjoyed the story.

Radomir1Radomir1over 2 years ago

The story began intriguingly. But then the author was "carried away by a flight of sick fantasy".

The result: the delirium of a drug addict and a schizophrenic.

Not at all like BigMadStork.

Or is it a group of authors?

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Yes, it's been a while since I published. I had a bit of a writer's funk and have survived. I just published a short story (for me), and more will follow.

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