All Comments on 'My Sister Connie'

Ohh dear god please dont stop now. This could be a wonderful romance between 3 siblings who it seems just adore each other and really enjoy a sexual romp. Perhaps they will decide to stay together and make some babies in the future. Could be a really hot sexy story.

Great sisterly loving. Hope you continue when Jan finds a new job near her siblings.

It doesn’t flow well as a story, it is somewhat stilted in the telling. But it was quirky and did not pretend to be anything else but a meaningless sex tale.

Scores 3/5

A great story. Would love to hear the rest of the story!!!

Very hot story. 6 stars worthy.

I got a chuckle at a wrong word selection

“ She mauls it over in her head”

Wonderful story. I was hard almost the entire time....... 5 Stars!!

Nice sibling reunion storyline.

My question is: were the parents originally involved with the girls during their graduation celebrations? Both of them said something that hinted that the parents had something to do with their desire to be nudist, and the girls each had something to say that dad told them around college graduation and after: Connie; "Hot to Trot": Jan; "Lawyers are all the same!"

Will the girls finally tell him why they wanted to be with him and incest doesn't bother them and schedule a family reunion orgy?

I enjoyed this story a lot. There were some consistency issues and unrealistic dialog, but overall it kept my interest. Good job, but proofread next time. Thank you.

I need to know and I also want to know why her ex was after her.

I agree, the timeline is screwed up. I'm fixing it as I write.

In the stories I have posted, I tried to insert humor into all of them, yet only one person has commented on it, Thank you 'sucksexful'. I appreciate the feedback. In addition to reading the bad comments, I also want to embrace the things you like about the stories as well. Keep the comments coming!

MDSW

Interesting story. I hope you are planning on at least one more chapter, but you really need at least 2 new chapters. Anyway, excellent start. Thanks.

Then they are acting like trailer trash???

Is there some law against trailer trash going to Harvard?

MDSW, really good story! I'm in agreement with Southpaw1430, there are too many opportunities to create more chapters continuing this arc!

Great response to all the "anons" out there dissing your writing. I find it interesting that those folks who come here to be titillated with *free* erotic stories have the temerity to criticize the writing style of the contributors. These are the same people that won't "show us" by writing their very own, error free erotic stories and publish them here!

Anyway, who cares, keep writing and posting!

Thanks for sharing this tale.

I enjoyed it although it was more a narrative then an engrossing storyline. Hard to explain.

why did you bring Connie's ex into the story? where were you going with that, unless you are going to write an addon to the story, it didn't make sense to bring him in and what was he pissed about, she hadn't been with ex in a year, takes him a year to get mad about something? two stars

To sexymeup: Try reading the story again. The reason why her ex was there is in the story. Why I put her ex into the story is for a little drama. Try to enjoy the story as written, without tearing it to pieces. Remember, I wrote the story from my brain, not yours.

please continue

While it is a fantasy for me, incest is so intriguing and turns me on in a major way. I probably would never do it now; being much older and banging my six years older sister is not the same it would have been years ago. I love the story and would love to read more. Perhaps where they all lived together or nearby for regular incestual orgies. I think Art has deeper feelings for Connie than his younger sister so I could see them living together as long as it did not interfere with their work. As far as the people that pick stories apart over spelling and grammar. Let it roll off your back or address them like you did. Those people will always be around to either offer constructive criticism or to make them selves feel better by pissing on someone else besides themselves. Hope more chapters to the "My Sister" stories come along. Especially Connie and Darcy where her brother and parents are also involved in the incest. I have not yet read the other two Sister stories so i probably will like them as well. Thank you for the great stories ! ! !

It was emotional. Even romantic. And of course hot.

But the ending just seemed a little sketchy.

Also, the story with the ex-husband doesn't quite make sense.

Next chapter or three please!!!

Screw grammar!

I do not feel stupid reading an exceptionally erotic and loving story because there are grammatical mistakes.

I look for sexual adventure and caring and sharing.

I am more concerned that the story is ending and I will not have Jan , Connie , and Art to read about .

Please continue the series.

Very entertaining, Well done 5 stars

11/10 Bottles of Champaign!!!!!

I would hope that you continue this story as there is much left hanging with it.

Great. Just short of amazing.