by pujo1950
Excellent. Very hot, loving, and fun story. I hope to see more of this story. 5stars
Nice story...too short...sister is SO SWEET, sharing that pussy with her 'little brother's...would really give 5 stars, but was left hanging...
Weird ending , almost like you were going to off on another hookup, but decided not to?
So I guess never decide someone isn’t going to like you , until you find out for sure.
Good, certainly left me wanting more.
A bit more about how they are growing closer, together, emotion, and a bit more description of the erotic action.
Very good, deserves another chapter....
So the ending on this one quickly drops off into nothing. 2 stars for the crappy ending. Too bad. It was a good story till you bailed.