All Comments on 'My Sister Debbie'

Your weird use of tenses made this unreadable.

Excellent! Thought you might have jumped into sex too soon but as it turned out it was just right. A great read.

Can't say what I think as critical comments get removed and I could be extremely critical of this story.

I loved this story. It was very well written. The story line was fairly common but it was presented in a way that expresses love and passion. Thanks.

Long, a bit too verbose at times. Sometimes sounded a bit juvenile in the sex descriptions. Don’t quite know how to describe that, just felt as if little less sex descriptions would have worked as well.

Hey folks, the anal sex described in this story is lacking realism. If it were added to make it real, it would be far too long to enjoy the story. If you are interested in anal sex, do your homework before hand. This story lacks several steps to protect and enjoy anal so be informed. Yes, you are right, I should have placed a disclaimer in the story, but I didn't. Write and learn.