by mfs1390034
Sorry. It's a personal preference I don't like the really long stories on this site. I'll try to make longer in future, though. At least a little bit. Maybe repackage when the story is complete as one long story if that's easier.
COME ON MAN
Where is the follow through. I could almost see them two running through the house each one trying to outsmart the other ,just like one of those old farces off the t.v this format could have a lot going for it. Great Fun.
Never finished the damned story, you tosser!
Great story ruined, scores 1/5 for being unfinished
Where's chapter 5 !?!?!??? Omg! You can't just leave it at that pivotal cliffhanger!!! Torture!!!
OMG! Over two years and still no more?
What is it with some authors? This could be REALLY good, but, NOOOO. Not from here. Just a little sadomasochism, huh?
You play rough.
Excellent story…SO FAR!
I love the cat & mouse game Sam and Sarah have going as they try to outsmart each other.
HOWEVER…It needs Chapter 5 (and 6, 7, and 8, etc.) to let is know what happens, and how Daddy figures into the story (please don’t ruin it by getting him involved, this is about Sam and Sarah, so it should be how they get together without being caught).
Wonder how many close aged sibllngs have first sex or near sex aka anatomy lessons with each other for real?