All Comments on 'My Sister Karen, My Niece, and Me'

Yes you definitely need a sequel with Karen and Lacey in a 69

This could use a sequel but this one needs minor editing as far as the age of the niece you kinda left me with the impression she is still a minor because you shifted from ten to sex with her and her mother without much in between to explain how much time went by so to me it reads that he is having sex with his 10 year old niece because you don't mention how long her and her mom have been alone together

Next chapter please .AAAA++++

This was fine - it's a great fantasy. The dialogue felt stilted, though, and it felt like there was basically no emotions involved in anything. Everyone just started rushing pell-mell into an incestuous threesome / triad relationship. Too much was exposition, and not enough was shown as far as feelings and emotions.