by GiddyDreamer
Hmmmm. . .
This will, without a doubt, provide numerous follow-up submissions.
This writing was very cringe and amateurish, next time don't write it like a wattpad fantasy and write it like real life.
Maybe I should stick to non-virgins stories. I’ve been with a number of great women so far but I never had the honor of deflowering a virgin. I always thought the hymen was ‘somewhat inside the vulva, near the beginning of the vagina’ and I figured that would be good enough for my story-line. Just goes to show, one might be well-advised to experience the virginal condition before writing about it.
Another 1 star for writing the same story again. This makes 4 times telling it here. You really should stop. Or change your user name to "One Trick Pony".