by ChadamSmith1
Cummed? The word is came. Come on, that's basic shit. Also, spell out numbers. You really need a proofreader.
It is interesting story to say the least. Waiting for chapter 3, but don't take 12 months to write it please.
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The gradual introduction of progressive sexual gratification is almost refreshing. Slow, but refreshing.
Will consumption come while the parents are off visiting family?
Does the extended family include cousins to jpin these two?
Lots ofor possibilities, please prepare subsequent chapters more carefully (tense/spelling).
Slow and tender.
Showing respect and love.
Can’t wait for the next chapter.