All Comments on 'My Sister Kelsey Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Cummed? The word is came. Come on, that's basic shit. Also, spell out numbers. You really need a proofreader.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wait. Does part two really follow part one. You idiot.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 2 years ago

Can't wait for Part 3!

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

It is interesting story to say the least. Waiting for chapter 3, but don't take 12 months to write it please.

AAAA+++

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The gradual introduction of progressive sexual gratification is almost refreshing. Slow, but refreshing.

Will consumption come while the parents are off visiting family?

Does the extended family include cousins to jpin these two?

Lots ofor possibilities, please prepare subsequent chapters more carefully (tense/spelling).

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
Nice continuation

Slow and tender.

Showing respect and love.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Just finished part 1 and 2. Please make a part 3 soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

super hot, wish i had a sister!

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