by nylonpunkie
"I take it you are fond of incestuous dysfunctional families.
Your write them well." - Feedback from James R
Indeed an excellent start to this story. It makes you want to read the next chapter immediately. The dialogue is first class. Another 5 stars for the author.
To be honest I'm not really sure about this story. The dialogue was well written but I struggled with the dislike for each other. Perhaps as one of three boys I haven't experienced that situation. A.