by instereo3
I'm glad to see that you decided to write more of this story, it is a fantastic story. I hope you don't keep us waiting so long for the next chapter (hopefully not the last).
Please keep going and maybe mom will get in on the act too.
This needs at least one more chapter of them finishing what was started.
he posted the same comment on all four chapters. i bet he is actually the writer of the story padding his ratings and giving himself a rave review to boot. this was a so-so story and in no way deserves a rave review. there were a lot of STUPID errors that should have been caught in proofreading (if it was ever proofread that is) and the plot was not very good, this series needs a total rewrite by a good writer using a good editor.
It just keeps getting better.I'm so envious that I never had a sister but then again I did have a beautiful cousin who had an equally beautiful mother. So nothing to complain about.
Keep up the good work.
It's being 10 years. Not continued. I hate unfinished stories like this good start.
The sister is going to get them busted, she is pushing too hard for sex and the way she says she wants his cum in her pussy she going to end up knocked up. she only thinking of what she wants and expecting her brother to go along with it. She is also putting the both of them at risk of going to jail, incest is not legal. she needs to slow the fuck down, she taking to many risks. He is dumb for letting her do whatever she wants, she is too careless by pushing things.