All Comments on 'My Sister Wants to Hire Me Pt. 03'

A very good ending and it left me wanting more. Roger divorcing Beth was a twist I didn't see coming, especially after the video screening with everyone. I was wondering how Jim and Beth were going to get together in the end. Great job as always.

Well written clever story. Not sure about the porn biz but a fun story despite it!

Not the best story, but it was ok. The filming angle really doesn't work well. It's just two people having sex.

I love a good bro-sis romance, but I was a little worried I wasn't going to like what happened to Roger. I needn't have worried. The way you wrote it, it was 100% his own fault that he lost her, and I just ended up feeling happy for them getting together in the end. The whole porn biz thing was an odd way to set it up, but fun.

I the story and the series but if he’s shooting blanks how did he get the GF pregnant? I guess Roger has a surprise coming too.

This gets better every time I read it, it is one of those stories that never gets old.

Loved this story hopefully you will add one more chapter to this with how their life continues and ends. Amazing story and awesome heartfelt emotions and plot.

Needs one more chapter

Great story, but needs an epilogue.