All Comments on 'My Sister Wants to Swallow Cum'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

How many gallons of "pre-cum?" 85? 90? Never seen it in a porno nor experienced it in rl.

zooliciouszooliciousover 1 year ago

We’ll, let’s see where this goes…

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ummm that was fairly bland. Had such potential and then just fell flat.

MrBill36MrBill36over 1 year ago
Just a Taste

Curiosity really is convenient at times and sex education classes are a blessing also. A lot of stories can be generated from this.

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

short 750 word story

CharletteCharletteover 1 year ago

Really disappointing !

This story had such potential.

BUT !

A second chapter can be written that gets all kinds of hot.

Will the author do it ?

sexymeupsexymeupover 1 year ago

no 18 yr old girl is that stupid about sex, so the story is not even close to being believable. I got my 1st blowjob at age 5 by the girl next door and she also got me to do anal sex with her. she was 10 yr old. we had sex every day in the basement also had anal with an other girl that lived close by that was also 10 yr old. the girls where we lived was very sexually active in that age group so the boys that lived there got laid too.that went on for a couple of yrs. until my folks moved to another location

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sex ed classes use videos of dicks cumming?

ShortieJenShortieJenover 1 year ago

Should have lead to more. A few editing errors also.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Can this be a multi-part story please. It needs a part 2.

Carnevil9Carnevil9over 1 year ago

Short and sweet! Did a good job of capturing the innocence of young lovers, along with the sexiness of the situation. Possibly this is the beginning of a beautiful relationship?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I've never heard of Sex Ed classes being so open about what happens during sex.... Even with the "Woke" schools sexualing children, I would think it is still illegal to show minor children pornography.

The story wasn't as good as it could/should have been.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

id love to see more of this story, love how enthusiastic she is!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

wow ,i wish that my sister would let me cum in her mouth,we had seen eachothers cock and pussy when we were kids but i wished my sister would want me to cum in her mouth the swallow every drop.i want to see more of this story continued,i love how it was so normal to her to do this,maybe she could suck him next time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This story screams for a second chapter. Who knows? After that, it might become a novel. lol Excellent story. It was believable. The only downside to the whole thing was Greta just doesn't sound right.

Curious2019aCurious2019a11 months ago

Reading this again. I love cum on hand stories. Great work!

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