All Comments on 'My Sister's a Zombie!'

Fucking hilarous, love you pulling so many of your story lines together. Raquel is a great character, loved the pacing as you gradually have been bringing her back. The relationship with Chris is sweet, the characters mesh so well as a new and very odd couple. Please keep them coming Shakna, you always write such intersting characters.

This was a fun romp, I quite enjoyed it. I will not object at all to its continuation, should you so choose.

Well done. And thanks.

- BH

cute and funny

What a novel idea! And written so very well. Thanks!

Another excellent story. Please do another chapter. Looking forward to more of this story.

Man, Raquel was so close to ending Ellie. Hopefully next time.

Seriously though, Vlad is thralled to Ellie? Gathered that from the "one of my boys" comment, but I might be reading too much into it. Missed that one in her story if i'm right.

@anon - Ellie's a queen. "Technically, I am a queen. Like a queen bee?" All the vamp boys do what she wants, one way or another.

Could you please give Ginger' a story and I love how you tie in the other story too

Such a great universe!

Love it keep it up!

Just FYI: the whole thing about your hair continues to grow after you die is a myth born from the skin shrinking and tightening as it decomposes.

Loved the story inspite of literotica failing to notify me that it dropped until just now, two days and 8 hours late. I was drifting in limbo somewhere inside of their servers without getting updates as I should have been. I also loved that Lilly made an appearance! 😍 5/5

Considering Rachel doesn't know or understand or care about her strength, I don't really see how this doesn't end with him either hospitalized or dead.

I mean, she temper tantrums in the car once too often, drives her feet all the way through, hits the ground with them, the car spins out of control killing him in the crash... Just one of many possible fatality actions she can cause him.

Loved it! Now that you’ve created yet another interesting world there needs to be a cross over story line that provides a little angst to one or more relationship. At least that’s my opinion, otherwise keep up the good work.

Jack

What ScottishTexan said about the hair. It definitely does not grow after death. At all. Also, *fuck* the idea of "adding a little angst" to relationships. Literotica is bursting at the seams with that lazy tactic for adding intrigue and tension or whatever you want to call it. But that's just my opinion.

Made me sniffle, you jerk. Awesome story.

I think this is the most original story I’ve read on this site. I’m gonna click on everything I have to so I can read part 2… and there better damn well be a part 2!!!

I liked it nothing like a sis love bro story.

Great premise and clever idea. You really need a second set of eyes for clarity. Whether information that is missing from the story or clarification of which description applies to which character, a proof reader/editor would be beneficial. The writing is good though. Thanks for sharing.

I beg of you. Plead even. Hell after using this site for 12 years I made an account to ask of you. Do werewolf next!

@AverageRed - Aww. I'm doing Changeling next... Buuut... Sure. Lets put werewolf on the list!

Now this was a nice romance. Seeing the pineapple squeezed onto Elis' head was fucking hilarious. Although I would still be terrified of accidental damage if I was Chris. looking forward to more of your works.

For a "fantasy" read it is surprisingly realistic. Great work.

Fun und Romantique!

11/10 Pineapples!!!!!

One small niggle...in regards to:

[Hair keeps growing for years after you die.]

This is a fallacy - as soon as you die ALL bodily functions cease.

(check out Ask a Mortician Caitlyn Doughty on Youtube)

And YES I know it's 'Fantasy', but this just got me - my 1st ever critical comment.

this is adorable

I need more stories like this. I loved the vampire story as well.

THIS

STORY

IS

UHHHH

MAZING

I didn't think I would read this. Never doubting you again. Stories like this remind me to keep trying to improve my own. This is that upper echelon of writer I want to be in the wildest way.

I do pray for him, though. Raquel is gonna break him eventually. What a way to go out, though.

Love the story. A bit different but it was enjoyable. AAAAAA++++++

This was so good and totally unexpected. Great world building. Please write a follow up a couple of months later so we can see her progress and maybe meet the parents. Please keep up the great writing.

Your imagination is... Quite the place.

@abiostudent3 - Be careful not to get lost in it. The dark parts have teeth.

You know what…. Loved it, the only downside is it ended, I’d love another chapter, maybe her meeting their parents or gaining more speech… what if they had a baby, I’m clutching at straws here I don’t want it to end here :’(

You know what…. Loved it, the only downside is it ended, I’d love another chapter, maybe her meeting their parents or gaining more speech… what if they had a baby, I’m clutching at straws here I don’t want it to end here :’(

Even tho this story was Weird As Fuck the one underlying aspect is how Raquel came back to life well atleast somewhat,she is still a Zombie,but for her to love her brother Chris enough to defy death and return to him makes the saying "Love conquers all,even death" is an accurate description of undying love.

Chris and Raquel may not be your normal siblings who have incest sex,but its not that much different with one being a zombie and one who's still alive,cause like they say "Different Strokes for different folks",as long as Chris and Raquel are happy with eachother what does it matter?.

Not as good as the last 3 chapters but an interesting take on a zombie though they can't heal lol

To the person who said it was surprisingly realistic you don't know anything about zombies do you 1 zombie bites will infect you and turn you into a zombie 2 they can't heal 3 they don't remember who people are they are driven to bite and eat people 3 they can't speak not even close 4 they don't have sex anymore all these took place in this story which is why it's a interesting take on zombies

As long as they love each other in the end I’m happy

Well I guess if you can get up, walk around, bruise, love, and secrete bodily fluids, then hair growing has to be on the cards, right!

This one I didn't expect to like and actually enjoyed on a par with Werewolf! And as usual the world building will keep me coming back for more.

In your chronology you mention My Friend's an Alien! About Fan, I guess, but I can't find it on the submissions page. Is it written? Did it get called something else? Evolve into a secret novella?