All Comments on 'My Sister's Lotion Pt. 05'

Can't wait for the next part! these are great

Hot series!

wow! looooovved this one!!! keep writing! :) :)

Only 1 page?

One more page of the same unimaginative shit I think that at this point this author should take a break until they can come up with a better story. I gave this pathetic attempt a 1 star rating.

This story had, so much going for it. The writing is disjointed and lacking. The false bravado and the I want to be tough attitude ruin the main character along with the stupidity. It could have been a GREAT series.