All Comments on 'My Sister's Pajama Ch. 02'

After a too short first chapter this is a very hot second one. But why has is to be "The End" ? As the brother likes his sister´s asshole so much, he could show her some anal pleasures ...

I liked it. I agree that you could go places with this theme, and have alot of fun along the way. Your writing is a little ESL, but not to the point where I didn't enjoy reading your story... Keep writing!

hey come on pal you should finish of story, that was little too short story so please make make finish it of ch. 03 thanks.

you stuck your tongue up her "dirty" asshole. Most people with an asshole fetish at least clean it out good.

Ruins the story for me.

100% until you stuck your tongue up her pooper.

A sexy and touching story of first experiences and a guy won't stick his tongue up his sister;s asshole.

lol you cumed fast heheheehahahaa

The story itself is a good one but no one talks like that unless you are a soppy old romantic, im assuming they are teenagers so why not make them talk like teenagers?

you sick mother fucker

The most beautiful point in this relationhip is LOVE LOVE. Having sex with your beautiful sister and loving her as a woman and same for her, cannot be described.I experienced such situation for years and we are still in love though married separately.None will be able to take this from us.NEVER.

Ok slow down in the start a sister just don't watch a naked brother till he wakes... she would wake him and be upset them slowly turn because she's horny. next the whole no intercourse should be longer and when he trys to put it in she should say no while panting but he should respond begging saying he just wants to feel inside and he won't move then he will slowly start to hump while she says no but don't stop him. then she says don't cum in her and you don't... that time.

so-so it was ok but hard to read due to you not writing in english but the end was so bad when she told him they couldn't fuck then gave him the dildo a real guy would have tossed the dildo on the floor stood up and told her either we fuck for real or i leave and we avoid each other from now on you have one hour to decide then he would go to his room and wait keep your stories sounding realistic and believable and stop rewriting human nature also never post a story without going through a good english speaking editor

I mean really? What the fuck is wrong with you guys????? IDk is incest is FUCKING WRONG ITS FUCKING WRONG. Stop fucking your sister and your mother and your cousins. ITS FUCKING WRONG I SWEAR IT IS. Im not gonna say your going to hell and bullshit like that but damn.... Maybe its just me IDK BUT THAT SHIT IS NASTY TO ME. FUCK YOU IM OUT..

Nice story it really turned me on the whole time I was just fantasizing about fucking my sister too and cumming in her

I want to get my sister into bed. do I just let her catch me wanking with her panties?

maybe you should comment on EVERY SINGLE story on this site... would that make you feel better? yeah we know its wrong and well, its hot...

that was hoot!

"HEAVEN WAS NEXT DOOR"

lol

ERM......didnt he get her pregnanat!!LOL!

i cant do that tu my sister she'll fuckin slap me or probably hit my BALLS!*OUCHHH* shes not dirty dirty

Dont you love the idiot readers on here that *knowingly and willingly* read the incest stories, prolly while they're jacking or jilling off, then have the nerve to say how evil and wrong it is and say were all going to burn for being bad? Hahahaha hipocrites!!

I liked the story, Ill say that first. Even gave it 4 stars, even though it didnt rate that much. Just encouragement! However...

Learn to use fucking punctuation! This is a period. "." It's only one keystroke dammit, use it! Then all the inconsistencies! How is his dick rubbing her thigh if he is holding the dildo between his thighs to fuck her?

He tells her he wants to "fuck her" then after she says no he magically switches to "make love 'with' you", I liked to have spewed my coffee!! Lol. Then her 'ass juices?!' Rofl. Hilarious crap but still enjoyed it! Keep writing and improving!

You continue with a longer chapter 3 with the parents gone and Sarah comes over to get a surprise very hot threesome with anal sex with Jack and Nikki.