All Comments on 'My Sister's Panties'

That ending came out of left field

WTF?

Looking forward to seeing where this goes...

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Very to short could expend more of the story before the cut

Are you fucking serious!

You have potential. Determine what the reader wants to know about before describing something. For example, you could have described your sister and her circumstances better at that point in the story rather than your class. Keep working.

Confused? So am I.

To be continued... I am hoping to have Chapter 2 out this weekend.

Many guys who got caught recieved strong punishment.

I found the story kind of interesting up to the gold banner debacle.

I think the author has potential but needs to focus on where the story is being presented.

Can we say Erotica ?