All Comments on 'My Sister's Secret Desires Ch. 02'

I think you found his future wife that will accept his sister

'Amanda'.

Or Keep Melissa as his boss and the sex or :) have him marry Melissa and his sister, Sarah can also stay in their marriage...

YOU SEEM TO HAVE A GOOD STORYLINE GOING FOR YOU SO FAR. IT IS WELL THOUGHT OUT AND A PLEASURE TO READ. KEEP UP THE GOOD EFFORT.

The only thing i don't like so far is the cheating wife. Like i said it's me and the way i feel . Whether it's male or female i don't like the cheating .Sorry. Other than that it's a awesome read so far.Thanks

key the title: have we determined the sister's secret desire yet?

sister will become the receptionist and run his business

like the idea of new girl as wife

and

then he has his harem like all the other John Law stories

well done

I think this might be the best story I HAVE READ SO FAR ON LIEROCTICA. I look forward to the continuing chapters. The writing is so well written. Now I wait for more.

What a great story! You must continue there are so many more chapters of possibilities.

I love this story. It can go in many directions. It's smooth to read and flows well. Your stories are always great to read. Can't wait until the next chapter9s0.

I look forward to the continuing chapters. The writing is so well written. Now I wait for more.

Love it

Well written, and the story line flowed well. Waiting for the next chapter.

I wanted to post as a member but the login screen only allows me to enter 4 characters.

Not many authors would do that.....

Maybe I'll try the next story............

So far so good. Some may not like it , but this sory is still good without the sexual parts. That says a LOT about your quality of writing. Also, this really has a different feel from most sibling incest stories. You have omitted a great deal of the incest guilt , etc that readers have to plod through in most of them. That is a welcome relief!

Great writing and story telling. Thank you.

JL, this entire storyline is well written. I am very very pleased with how you've developed John; her pleasure always first, kind and considerate, and humble. I relate to how you lay out his interactions with others.

I am very also fond of Sarah's character.

I'd very much like to see more stories of these two.

Thank you.

Incest never shares, a fact.

Great story, scores 5/5

Now, np matter how well this series has been done so far, one thing that is offputting is sex with a married woman.

That act alone belies the John character being a gentleman, on the straight and narrow, of unquestionable integrity, honesty and all those other honourable attributes.

Only thing is that John's sex moves are the same pattern with every woman. I don't have a huge body count, but I did find that not every woman liked my "pattern", so I had to change on the fly. Surveys also show women get bored wit the same old, same old faster than men.