All Comments on 'My Sister's Secret Desires Ch. 04'

Glad you are writing again missed this story.

Bummer that you killed off the parents the way

you did but now I see a bro/sis getting "married "

Looking forward to fun times in Aruba and how John keeps busy.

Thank you.

Awesome story. Keep them coming.

What happened to Amanda? I was left with the impression that they were in a relationship.

I had just found this series, and absolutely thrilled that you are continuing it!! Keep it up! It's a great story with a lot of different paths to take. And I love the thought of them all.

What a fantastic series. Your stories are full of variety and some hot sexy stuff with gorgeous women. Please keep going. I am sure somewhere along the line there will be babies appearing and the house may not be big enough for his harem and the tribe of children.

While an excellent story there's a huge plot hole with Amanda. At the end of Ch 3, they separated with the lingering idea of being in a relationship. While the fatal accident is an efficient plot device to get the family angst dealt with, it left the Amanda as John's GF out of the picture, which could have just as easily been used to cover-up Sarah sleeping with John every night.

Other than that, I feel it's another JohnLaw success. I'll be waiting to see how the rest of this plays out.

Love the series and I'm looking forward to the next installment...I did kinda feel like the "accident" with the parents was a bit of a cop out to avoid the issue. Not saying it was a bad thing, just my opinion...can't wait to see where this story goes, keep up the good work!!!!

PLEASE DON'T MAKE US WAIT SO LONG. IT'S A VERY GOOD STORY AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTERS.

Since you said to be continued, i hope you realize sarah and her brother are screwed. And melissa is the architect. Shes got to do her best to get sarah fkd in aruba. She can't afford to have her cash cow gone. She has already started by telling john he can never quit sleeping with his clients. So what happens if he and sarah get even more committed to each other?

I love this story...it is well written and fabulous plot. I hope to see more. Sorry for being anonymous but I haven't taken the time to build an account. This is my first comment I have left.

Loved it !!!! Disappointed there has not been a follow up chapter since July 2020

My God that was hot !

If you don't finish this it will be a crime.

So please - JUST FINISH THIS !

Rapier

Uh oh, looks like I caught up to your writing. May I ask when the next chapter will be published?

Old AL ECHOES THE SENTIMENTS OF THE OTHER COMMENTS. THIS STORY IS SIMPLY TOO OUTSTANDING TO LIE DORMANT. ANOTHER CHAPTER, PLEASE.

Do you need someone to proofread? I’m definitely old school. I am willing to work to get what iwant, so if I can do ANYTHING to help you with the next chapter, just contact me.

And of course this was another 5 star publication!

please write more of this story

I have read all the chapters and loved every one. I'm a little disappointed that you forgot about Amanda. I think there is still room for her to be in the dynamic. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please hurry!!

More more please

Please provide an epilogue to this nice story!

Yeah the continuity error of omitting Amanda I think is really my only dislike of the story and she was such a bigger part in the last chapter to have her just be gone for no explain reason seems really odd.

More please

It's been over 18 months since Chapter 4 appeared, somehow I doubt you're going to finish this now.

One very big disappointment after all you've written.

Rapier

I can't wait for the next chapters to be released. Thank you for your great writing.

Fuck, this is hot!

This is a fabulous series but you left us hanging high and dry! Please finish it.

Please pick this one up again?

Very disappointed to find out the Author has unfinished stories. Second time. I'll unfollow the next time. Still because the story is good I gave it a five star rating. Yes he has a current story. I guess I'll have to go straight to the comments to find out if the Author is leaving stories unfinish and call it quits with the Author!

We loved it! When will you write another chapter?

80 + year old hotties!

please finish this story

Great ...but story doesn't seem finished , just cut off!....cheers ( keep writing )

Be great to continue he it

Why has Amanda from School, just disappeared? Apart from that a nice easy flowing story