All Comments on 'My Sister's Wedding'

But I gotta say, with a family like his, I understand why he doesn't come around much. Too many "meddlers".

You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors here on Literotica. Your stories always develop your characters nicely. Thank you for hours of entertainment.

I don’t believe this story is up to DG Hear standards.

Feels empty yet it’s a 6 of story.

No backing to the feelings, meaning he or she feels them without supporting emotions.

I was definitely turned off when earlier Toni state she does not want any anal sex at all.

Then give her no warning he thrust =

"Just a finger or two. I promise I won't hurt you."

Who the f__k does he think he is?

And her response was

“She agreed”

Doesn’t make sense= ie not supported.

This is below par, your other stories are better.

But I thank you for your effort.

I think this is a very nice story, as is the usual when DGH is the author. My only problem with it is “John’s” description of himself as the black sheep of the family. I don’t think he fully understands the term. I mean, he has dinner with his parents, at least occasionally. His sister claims he’s her favorite brother. His other siblings still treat him nicely. Trust me, that’s not the way a “Black Sheep” gets treated. I know from bitter experience. But my nit-picking aside, this is a great story, no doubt 5 star worthy.

Why do people write stories where it's supposed to be serious, the narrator isn't trying to be friends with the reader, etc, but then totally ruin everything-and I mean everything-by then going of into some crap like, "I have to go back to tell you about my college days." What, is that the only way to do a flashback? Is it even necessary if the story got on well enough before then? What about, "When I was in college...?" Is that such a burden? Yes, to many writers that ought to know better, it is too much to step away from the really formulaic structures that plague amateur stories. Like the second paragraph in LW stories describing the narrator's name, height, weight, eye color, muscle tone, then his wife's bust measurements, eye color, name, weight, etc. How terribly dreadful.

Beautiful storey

This was an awesome story. Very well written. Keep up the good work

Such an enjoyable read. Very engaging characters that make you hope for the best for them. Bravo

If Toni has a student loan,where did she get the money to buy into the vet practice and a house?.

Someone asked how Toni afforded half a Vet Clinic with Student Loans and paying for that Clinic but obviously it was generosity,Toni was described as an Angel and people loved and adored her and wanted to help her and Jessie.

It was so special that John found and fell in love with Toni and Jessie to give them everything since Toni's first Husband died.Admittedly John was the Black Sheep of the Family but eventually he settled down and found Toni and lived happily ever after and reconnected with his loved ones.So I am glad this story worked out so good.

Held my interest all the way thru.

I’ve read this story several times and always have enjoyed it. One of my favorites here at Literotica! ~ 5+

After she retired as a USN SEAL Commander, and discovered sunken treasure off Key West, she was able to buy into the clinic.

That's how it works, right?

OMG What a beautiful and romantic story. Definitely a five star rating 🌟👍🌟👍🌟👍🌟👍🌟👍

Thot it was a well written love story.

My only issue with this author is that in his stories he seems to equate the depth of love with how good the sex is ( I know that even though we haven't made love yet, that I love you. ) love based on sex will fail. Love based on a feeling (also known as lust) will fail. Love is a choice. I chose to love my wife and she chose to love me. Thats why you say those 2 words of choice at the altar... "I Do!" I knew long before i made love to my wife that i deeply loved her and it has only grown deeper over the last 36 years.

4****

Yes ,I think his brother deserved to know his future wife was expecting a proposal from him shortly but was off looking for sex with strangers before it would happen. There might be room there but a true brother would not keep it a secret.

What's the point of a six page story when the ending is a foregone conclusion on page 1? As soon as Chris mentions Toni it is done, there's no mystery as to what will happen next. Romance feels like it needs some suspense instead of certainty from the get go.

Ah D G i just love a great romance wish I could have one Best wishes (jaybee186)

What a warm and loving romance story. It just doesn't get any better than this. Well done 5++stars

Good story!! But why do all men become pussy-whipped after marriage....even thus guy

The one thing I have a problem with was the sister-in-law who wanted a little strange before she settled down. What is to stop her from wanting a little more before having kids or any other major life issues. Red flags for serial cheater.

it's strange the way you have with wives who unilaterally stop taking contraception at the time of their marriage without warning or informing their husband.

Excellent story line and lots of unexpected situations (having made love to all his sisters-in-law for instance). I loved how the lyrics of the song at the end match the hope and the longevity of marriages as demonstrated by the grandparents generation. They must have discovered the real recipe of long successful relationships based on active and productive communications instead of reverting to cheating and/or swapping.

I loved the way Toni comes back with excellent, intelligent and quick answers and responses to her husband with a loving smile and lots of heart.

Easily 5* ++++

BJ

Cute. Actually, darn good. Great twists and turns. The guy was really a horn dog but turned out OK.

I am not real fond of the MC in college; at least he was a man whore.

A few parts we weren’t overly found of, but we’re so very misty over the whole love story.

We thank you for such a great read and reminding everyone what’s soooo important in life and your relationship with your significant other loved ones.

Great author, great romance, great read.

DGH does it again - 5*

Great Story!! I Loved it!!

If only there were a part where we get to know that Toni was banging the MC's brother just before marriage; just the way he did with his brothers - it would help close all the loose ends.

WOW ! 5 Stars for a great love story. Thanks DG Hear.

In most of this cuck writer's stories, established men find readymade families to settle down with

The man is an amazing story teller. I like that so may of his stories teach valuable lessons for life.

I just finished reading "My Sister's Wedding" and it blew me away. I would rate this one of the Top Ten Romance stories on this site. Keep up the Outstanding Work.

It's a very beautiful story. It definitely a five star 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟. Thank you.