All Comments on 'My Sleeping Love'

I really enjoy this story. It was really poetic like and maybe even enchainitng with being half asleep in the moment.

I also thought it was beautifully written. Only I didn't quite understand the goodbye forever part at the ending.

I also appreciate it wasn't all foul language which I find often reduces the erotic romantic moment in fics to nothing but lust.

Well that was depressing.