All Comments on 'My Softball Coach Ch. 03'

You are doing a great job writing this! This story is so good and just getting better! It's not like a lot of the others where you could guess what will happen next. You've thrown me for a few loops already. Love these characters! Cant wait for the next one!

I'm still panting. I hope there's another chapter. This was HOT. I love it!

The story has potencial, but this chapters read like a 1st draft of a story no like something that has been developed.

i like this story! but a little more plot development would make it an even more interesting story! the characters need an obstacle to overcome even just a small one like kasey & her fighting or something interesting! i think it would make ur story really really great:)