All Comments on 'My Son Daniel'

that was intense. great build up. i sure hope the mom gets what she wants and needs from her son.i like how you are slowly getting to the final act between them. this is how erotica should be written. fantastic job. next chapter please.

Very hot and well written. People who read this story, should tell a friend.

More, please, more!

Very hot, great story - has me hard & waiting for more... please continue...

Fantastic story - loved every bit of it - Keep them cumming

Great writing please continue with the story.

really good

Because of your story, I have a mess in my shorts.

clearly one of the top writers here, in both originality and writing skills. must be awesome in bed, too..... :)

Great! Nice and hot! Your ingenious style is a nice and fresh Gift! Please let them explore some more!

Thanks for Writing!

Sexmate

Great story I hope there is more soon I give it a five

Hope there's more to come...soon!

I must know about the future that these two took. please write more chapters of this story.

What a hot little story. I can't wait for Chapter 2.

Just discovered your writing today. Have read a few stories, and everyone is a 5! Thank you so much.

And like the others, I'd love to read more about these two.

the most i ever came was in my mom i was so hard i just turned 18 she was drunk i gave it to her

great first story of yours i have read. my son denial.

very exiting hot and horny. wheres the second part.

Lots of potential here alright! He desperately needs to fuck his mother, just as she desperately needs his cock sunk deep into her. Just do it!

you should definitely continue this!

I would definitely enjoy seeing this continued. Amazing! I love his cocky smile.

A great, well writtend sexy story 10/10

It's a pity that this gifted author never completed the story of Daniel and his mom. The boy did just what lots and lots of boys'd love to do. Daniel showed his mother his fine fat cock and low-hanging loaded balls for her viewing pleasure, with a big wide grin on his handsome face. Mom got real wet between her legs as she looked over everything her boy had hanging between his strong young legs. Daniel started to get hard right in front of his mother, and mom nearly fainted. Though the story was never continued, it's obvious what happened. Boy and mom came together, he stuck his big cock up his mother's mommy-hole, she came like crazy, and Daniel unloaded his young balls up his mother's warm wet loving cunt, giving her the best gift a boy can ever give his beloved mom--a huge twatful of his creamy semen. Daniel'll be doing that a lot from now on.

As this author hasn't written anything on this site since 2007, I don't think we'll see how this hot story could have turned out. Too bad. It had great potential.

I sometimes watch my son wank when we are alone at home. He has now passed puberty and growing fast. Soon he will be man-sized and hopefully performing like his dad does.

Omg let me do that to you please

Finish this story, and finish Mom. Use fins if need be.

But you must contiue this story...what the hell happens now !?!?

Cheers,

M

You REALLY need to finish this story!!!

If your going to write a gay story let readers know. That way those of us that are not gay wont waste our time opening that page

To the ignorant Anonymous below, this story is over 16 years old. Do you really think the author really gives a shit what you think after all this time, or even visits this site anymore?

Wonderful story and pent up situation!