All Comments on 'My Son, Mr. Hyde'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

hope theres more chapter to this story!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

We need a late in life pregnancy

banyadeewana1501banyadeewana15019 months ago

Wow! This was an amazing read. I loved loved loved every word! Beautifully written. Solid Build up, great plot. Love the Dom-Sub dynamic between the Son-Mon. Hope to read more parts. 5 stars & fav!!!

muskyboymuskyboy9 months ago

Nice story. Needed a lot more dialogue and was twice as long as it should have been. Still nice though.

AlwaystabooAlwaystaboo9 months ago
Mom still thought of dad, son was next fantasy.

Very well written exploring wanton desires of an unencumbered deprived mom. Easiest and safest is her son. He gave her what she wanted, fire and earth as she had with his father.

nippelfansmall2nippelfansmall29 months ago

indeed as @muskyboy already mentioned, it needs dialogues..

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I write very amateurish fantasy for my own amusement and hopefully for others. I am strictly a two-fingered typist, so stories take hours to complete and sometimes finish due to cramping, resulting in careless editing and sudden stops. I attempt to present views from bo...