by EyeCreated
Honesty so few have courage to verbalize. Such tender thoughts during cognitive dissonance.
Very well written
Hope Oedipus Rex doesn't become Oedipus Wrecks something with so much potential.
I like your style and I think sometimes authors go for a short, artistic story rather than a longer one, but I think even if that was your plan, you should have gone longer.
It's a good story like your other stories but it's very short.I hope you write longer ones or continue these stories.It holds a lot of potential.
Great story! Now it's time for "My Son Put His Cock in My Pussy." I was limping when I walked after I fucked my son for hours.
Well it was overdone and unrealistic, too much attempt at drama and short on sexual titillation.