All Comments on 'My Son’s Penis Is Online Pt. 04'

It's a sweet story but I can't help wondering what kind of story it is gonna end up being...

Finally getting to it!

You can take the tease too far.

Come on! Have them fuck already!

I can’t decide if I like the slow pace or not.

5* anyway

Tc

Pace is too slow. Write the whole story , then submit the whole story. You are losing readers with every "nothing really happens" chapter.

You could have put all 4 stories into one chapter. All the stories move so slow.

yes good no great story but will come back in 3 or 4 weeks to read all of it in one time

see you

maybe

I love the slow pace. I mean no one goes to a movie and gets the grand finale half way through. Obviously those that are complaining about it being a slow pace don't have any idea that stories have to have a plot. Rushing in without a plot can be detrimental to the story on a whole. That's why most porn films are a load of shit nowadays. people need to relearn patience.

Toooooooo Sloooooow

Klitomatic I was thinking the same thing 🤣🤣🤣

Am enjoying this

You know, I love me a good lead-up, but this is turning out to be kind of a snooze fest.

Its not the stories pace thats the problem. I love the slow build up. Its the delivery method. Its like reading a sentence one word a day. Maybe save 2-3 "chapters" for one story?

Starting to lose me with these short chapters story's. The last two could of been released together for a better reading. Hope the next is alot better

I'm really enjoying your story, but... did you forget about the younger kid? Is he still in his room eating his snack?

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Don’t listen to the naysayers. Nice job!

I like your style. Looking forward to the next chapter. Both mother and son have a special bond. You're describing it well. This mother will succeed, her love for her son will make it happen.

What happened to the next chapter?

It's well written. It's time for the lovers to be, to continue their intimate longing for each other to the next level. Her son seems to be ready. You've written a beautiful story so far but there are more chapters to be written and shared. ;)

I've followed this story since the first part wad newly posted. I have anxiously been awaiting another part!

Superbly written. Great, believable tension. Looking forward to the next part and whatever else you write. Thank you.

All build up, no story....

Ready for the next couple of chapters

Okay better but still to short you need to make more than one page up to this point I wouldnt consider the previous two parts as something that belong in erotica other than the mom seeing pictures of her sons cock... Other than that its very boring at the end here its finally heating up but you stop at the worst time

I can't believe you stopped this series just when they got naked together. You are CRUEL!!!!!