by soul71
Enjoyed the series very much and enjoyed reading it. Thanks much for writing it
Dam what a great story. Had me tearing up when Franklin passed away. No matter what other authors story I'm reading, as soon as you post something I'm reading yours. You are my favorite on here
WHAT?! I'm so blown away! You never see death so casually tossed into the narrative! Which in and of itself only made it all the more perfect, sad though that is. Jumping to the far ending so quickly, to bring in Regan, would only ever possibly end one way.
But I must say, the broken heart? Absolutely so beautiful. Touching truly.
Outstanding effort! I have several disagreements in how some of the character interactions were handled, but nothing that keeps me from respecting your writing and giving the series a solid 5*. Look forward to more adventures with your stories...
Enjoyable story. Thanks for the 5* effort. How about a follow-on: Debs story?
Another fantastic story. Lots of emotions in this story and the other 2 chapters. I was happy with the ending. You summed up your story to perfection. 5stars
An awesome story. Well written and I couldn't read fast enough. I'm so glad this author doesn't mind expanding stories.
Absolutely brilliant, as soon as I started reading, I couldn't stop, the way you made every character's lives intertwine kept me hooked, I had to recharge my phone 4 times...Thank you, I'm following you and look forward to reading so much more.
I have to admit I am sad this story ended. So well written and I loved the characters!
Yet another of your stories that I absolutely love from start to finish thank you soul71 for all your hard work to entertain us all.
Great story, thanks. The tax bite on his earnings would have been horrible. At least 50 percent. Higher in NY, self employment tax is 14 percent, or more. ny state and city, and federal would be at the highest rate.
He got fit and sofisticated very quickly, would have taken longer than 3 months. But otherwise great story.
This is one of those stories that truly sadden me when we see them go. I love how it starts out, but I feel like there should have been a more severe penalty Iliana would have pay in order to find the path herself and Drake could walk together. Also the twins needed a lesson physically presented in bruises, contusions, and maybe some lightly fractured ribs and the bones in their hands. The levels of disrespect they dumped out onto their lil brother Drake needed some strong retaliation and retribution delivered by Drake. Then they could have set down and figured out the direction they needed to move towards.