All Comments on 'My Son the Gigolo'

great story m8. but what's with the cliff hanger o man that's some shit lol but hell yeah great stuff keep up the great work

I would like to see a continuation of the story

I personally absolutely loved this one and really enjoyed how long it was, I was lost for hours reading it. My mind is a whirl trying to think who the redhead is, maybe his mother's sister, considering the red hair. Great story as always.

As the title says Damn that’s a good story..

If there’s a part two, I can see Drake teaching his brothers how to woo the ladies and maybe after enough teaching, introducing them to his Madam.

The girl at the end is the school girl is the waitress, she might threaten him, fall in love with him and marry him..

But with you writing.. who knows what could happen in part 2.

Thank you you did it again, just love the way you write your story.

This so a 5 star from me. So keep them coming.

I'm with cursrah.

Would live to see atleast 1 more chapter.

Ed

Absolutely brilliant story and one of the better ones I've read in awhile. Loved the cuckquen aspect in it and would love for you to write another one in your style with it. It sounds like the red head at the end could be the girl that he went to school with that was waitressing at the night club he went to, you definitely need to write a continuation where it delves into what happens there.

I'd also like to thank you for writing your stories here and on the other sites it is always a pleasure to read your new stories or to reread your previous ones keep up with the excellent work.

Besides the start of the story out of all your stories this Family gets along the best and I liked that

Iliana and Drake will be lovers forever now, she got pregnant to drake, they will have a few kids together, the twins will move to the next door with Emma and keep her loved and satisfied.

you put a lot of effort into this. great reading and i hope you keep it up

Nice story. But please finish your other stories. (Family Secrets and Pharaoh)

Loved your story, but didn't liked the fact that the mother fucks 3 guy, emma, in the end also fucks 3 guys, they are sluts but want love... hard to give love when they takes other's cocks in them unless you are cuckold.

Loved the new story. You nailed it again!

Hate to tell you whoever you are Family secrets is finished for now.

Every so often I come across a story on this site that I just can't stop reading. This was one of them. I will be reading your other selections as well.

If you ever need someone to help with editing. Feel free to send me a note.

Whew! That was a ride. Normally, I'm not one for rollercoaster rides, but this one was worth it. Five stars all the way!

I really enjoyed it. Just wished there was more sex and in detail. Need more stories where a mother lusts for her wealthy son over the other men in her life. Cuckold was good in the beginning but a scene where drake watched one of them fuck her would’ve been nice

Another success, Soul71!

Very well-balanced, with just enough drama, compelling story, and carnal delights.

Would love to see some sequels to this (I'm very curious where the "red head" fits into all of this) and maybe even a spinoff for Emma or the twins.

Fun story but I would have loved him forcing the twins to eat his cream pie for the jerks they had been.

That last part sounds like the girl from the club and will her sister find out who the man is that got her disowned.

Great story. Would like to see a sequel of this story.

Well done. I liked the reoccurring realization mom screwed up, and then her redemption. Would enjoy a part two possibly featuring the old class mate and maybe the limo driver and his madam. That might be interesting. Thanks again.

Love this story. Any chance of a part 2 ?

Great story. Any chance at a sequel?

Mighty long story, but you did maintain a modicum of interest, however the time span was a tad difficult to measure as Drake buffed out, list his virginity and gained the skills to be a such an amazing gigolo. But, I was still willing to tap a 5* rating

Still a great read,could do with a second part so we see who the woman at the end is.

The woman at the end is the classmate that recognized him when he went on the date with his mother amd Emma. She said she was honna look him up andni guess she finally did.

loved this, How about continuing it? 5 stars of course

Is this gonna get a continuation?

Good story, but hard to reconcile the total slut mother claiming to be so in love with her son, but at the same time fucking her other 2 sons and the neighbor....

Please continue this story. It can go so much farther.

I still think this is one of your best ones. A sequel would be awesome.

A fun ride!

This is one of my favorites. It's one of the very few times where the MC actually gets his revenge and doesn't chicken out or just give in. And the fact that he still got her in the end is a bonus. I hope there's a sequel to this.

Excellent, as usual. Your the best soul, just the best, Never stop writing! Please!

A continiation for this story?? I had loved to read it.

This was one hell of a story, REALLY well written! Started it, and couldn't stop reading until I completed it. Thank you for this!

Great story but cliffhanger ending want to read that story now

This is one of your best work yet, could use a few more chapters, but still a very good story, thanks.

YES! Thank you for writing a part 2 to this! I can't wait till it comes out!

It was interesting till you said the size of his sick. Twelve inch circumference. The largest ever recorded was 8 inches. That ruined the story for me.

You didn't have to be an asshole to your brothers, man.

well worth all the time it took to voraciously devour this story! The trick was Drake getting rejected by Ilianna at the beginning, then him turning the tables and rejecting her, all the while buffing up his resume'. I have to go find my tape measure to see if i need to call bullshit on the 12" circumference cock. I also called BS when you said he had a 4" across cock! How could it even fit between his thighs?! I've seen one in person that flaccid had to be 2 1/2" across and that was incredibly wide, so... lemme go find that tape measure!

Found it! So... unless a woman can dislocate her jaw like a snake, there's no fucking way she could even get the crown in her mouth at 12"! That's as big as my large size french press! He'd give local doctor's plenty of business stitching women up like they just had episiotomies! I know that stories can be fantastic, the stuff of fantasy, but c'mon man! And why pair that with only 7" in length? Give him a longer stroke!

A fairly glaring problem i see in your writing is the vast number of incomplete sentences- participles masquerading as sentences. No verbs, mostly. Sometimes it's that you've used a period instead of a comma, other time there's no resolution to the sentence. All this makes it hards to parse, at times. Maybe slow down or reread it out loud to see and hear the problems.

Went all the way through this gem and didn't skim through once, and now i find there's another chapter! I'm in! Thanks for writing! 5stars