by nickisilvers
Not my usual genre, but very well written.
Took your time with the story, built some tension. If being critical, ending it just as he came didn't allow the moment to "breathe"
Even if you want him to be a dick, and leave straight away, how does she feel? Is she elated, lustful, shameful. There must be a maelstrom of emotiobs going through both of them, that could have been explored.
Other than that, excellent 5* story.
Next - perhaps we find out dad and daughter have been enjoying their tome together too much too.
Maybe Tristian takes her from dad too and has her and mom servicing him together. Mark treated like the beta he his.
Very fucking hot! The build up was great! I just wished that the actual sex had lasted longer. Five stars and a favorite point!
I would love to see him have his father submit and watch him breed his mother and sister and then have his dad do clean up duties to him and his mom as his mom cleans his sister.
Like the build up, enjoying the dominance from the young man. I'd love to see "at risk" free play. Like mom sucking him off while dad's in the other room or on the kitchen while dad and sister are seated at the table. Have the daughter eventually find out, but she's been banging him too. Have mom and daughter on a threesome.
Maybe building to where dad is fully cuck'd, and got to admit I'd love to see the dad become a sub too. Cleaning fluffing all around submissive.
But its your story.
Thanks for your work,
Nice story, but steer them towards love, no need to be rude, submissive or dominant, Tristan will see that his mother is the perfect woman for him and mom realizes that she is in love with her son, they are perfect match for each other,
so make them fall in love, making love every day, Tris filling his moms hot pussy with his cum, her wanting to get filled and impregnated by her son... More, soon, please!
Keep it going! Have mom submit totally to him, and his older sis as well. Totally cuckold dad!!
Much better, but you still need to FTDS. Adding affection and romance would add a lot to this story.
Incredible tale, highly erotic, I loved it. It's not ridiculously overplayed like so many Mom/son stories, She has doubts whether or not she's doing the right thing, but his commanding attitude overcomes any doubts she might have had, and she submits. There is a wealth of potential in this story, I hope you tease it all out, cuckolding and mother fucking can be complex, but so fucking horny a subject too. Looking forward to some more, soon hopefully. Iy got 5 Stars and a follow from me.
Very well written. Admiration for he courage to write about your fantasies(or perhaps experience) My mom was my first lover. Always thought it was shameful but it is not. Mothers love for son is beyond comparison.
After his mother kissed his cock again while still setting on the Couch. Tristan bent over her and picked her up so carefully like she was a golden blanket. Carrying her in to his bedroom, and layed her carefully down on his bed. Then started undressing her, she just layed there, let him with a huge smile on her face..
I really felt this one. Thank you for the lyrical felatio. I Would be happy if you get feet involved as well. Hope if you don't mind touching myself while reading.
Be blessed.
Love the story. Mum was so hot for his cock please tell us more. We need to know how it feels inside her and how she loves him taking control
Fantastic story line, can't wait to read what's next for Mum??? I'm rock hard reading this, is this normal??
5 Stars. Well done. You have to get his sister on board, poor dad though, he's out of the picture... I mean unless he could be convinced to become a 'switch hitter'. That would definitely complete the family picture.
5 stars. Amazing story. It would be fascinating if the father went on a trip and the son overpowered her in her bedroom while she slept and forced her to keep quiet, lest the sister discover them
Incredible story, It would be fascinating to have the father go on a trip and give him an overnight visit.
I read some of the comments. Sister is already on board. How do i know? Mom went looking for her in the beginning but found a butt plug. Mom doesn't know yet, BUTT she will.
Wow….just wow!
Forget the father….he doesn’t need to be involved. But the 20 year old sister has to join in. But the natural progression would be for Tristin and mom to bang away. Great job!
Please write more - right away!!
What a hot story you've created out of the overworked cliche of the big dick. Well done! Your writing is excellent, so well paced and descriptive. Loved it and looking forward to more.
In reading the comments I’m surprised that some fans aren’t getting the story crossover angle. Hope you keep writing! Where do they go from here? Mom/Daughter/son seems inevitable!
I loved the story, but it seems a bit unfinished. She needs to perform the final act!
Thanks!
the mother should have immediately knelt before the son and asked him to ride her immediately
She needs to plan a night of unprotected, fertile love making with her virile son. The heat from a baby bump will drive them crazy with lust.
Really successful sequel.
I can only give 5 stars.
Now I would be happy about a few parts just with mother/son and at some point also with the daughter. So that both stories run together in one.
Love the story. I'm hooked on it. Please keep going with more chapters. We need them. Please...
I've enjoyed all your writings. I hope you continue the story line. I'd love too see the whole family fucking each other. That includes the father and son going at it with as much enthusiasm as as he had with his sister. Again really love your work, please keep them cumming!
HOT HOT HOT!!!!
Next step???
Full body massage, much more detailed comparisons hubby-son.... ;)
Loved it. Tristan could have been a little more demanding without being brutish.
The beautiful awakening of a parent truly noticing an offspring for the first time. This story tells the reality of being " wrapped around my little finger"
With my mother the control shifted a events did.
Nice continuation of Tristan and his mother's developing relationship. I'm looking forward to his mother's wanting him to 'dip his wick' in her welcoming tunnel of passion and for them to continue their relationship as a Mother and Son With Benefits for an extended period.
What an excellent writer you are. Part two definitely deserves a five star rating once Mommy sucks her son’s cock to completion ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I gave 3 stars for son's cocky attitude, which spoilt the story a bit for me........